CAN SOMEONE RE WRITE THIS WITH CORRECT GRAMMER WILL MARK BRAINLIEST
"Mr. Jacks!" Kate screamed over her head. With the face of the sun behind him she could only see his dark side. Kate jumped with excitement "You did it!" She was very excited. She noticed he was alone and wondered how everyone was doing. "Has anyone else done this?" she asked. He just stood there and didn't answer. Instead he moves closer so Kate can get a better look at him. Mr. Jacks is not. Standing there was a sad figure that made her shudder. Kate recoiled in horror. Shadow tends to evil. "OK!" Kate said softening the attack. Although he tore the shirt but she was fine. What was Kate thinking?
Kate started to panic even though she knew she didn't want to be attacked. The shadow began to follow her roaring in anger and his feet changed shape and his long toes turned into long dagger like weapons. "What was I thinking!" She said. Kate ran for a long time and saw her shadow. "I think I'm good." she bowed. "I cant do anything." At last she smiled but tears fell from her eyes. "Its certainly better than dying in a bubble. Then suddenly Kate heard a loud bang from behind her. She saw a beautiful African American woman standing with her finger on the trigger. Another shot and the shadow figure fell to the ground, disintegrating within seconds The girl had cold dark eyes and short fluffy hair and scars over her body. Kate knelt down, shaking, crying and gasping for air." Are you alright?" the girl called out. Kate sighed in relief. "Oh thank god". The girl walked over to her, "¨The names Aaliyah What's your name?" she asked. Kate looked up and replied, ¨My names Kate. You came just at the right time! When did you get here?". "I noticed you being chased so I ran as fast as I could .". "Now come with me, I'm taking you to somewhere safe". Kate and Aaliyah ran to a secret base with food, water, and other supplies. "Here, keep this" Aaliyah said while handing Kate a walkie talkie
"If you need help call me". Aaliyah also gave Kate a weapon for protection against any outside entities. "There are many entities out there." Kate asks, "What are some of the entities?" "Some are Howlers, Smilers, Pariteneth, Marauders, and the worst of them all, The Dreaded, The Faceless, And Ambush. Some of these entities live in caves and lurk in darkness. Just like the smiler that chased you.". "Some of these entities live in caves and lurk in darkness. Just like the smiler that chased you. Always keep this weapon with you". Aaliyah gives Kate a katana.
They exit the base as a smiler and a howler roar coming towards a cave entrance. They both eliminate the entities. "We have to get to the electrical to turn off the forcefield and eliminate all entities", Aaliyah said. Kate said surprised "With all the entities?". "Listen, we can save the others and get rid of all entities, or leave them to stay in a bubble for the rest of their lives." Kate says confidently "Lets do this!" Kate and Aaliyah eliminated some howlers and Marauders on the way to the electrical. Aaliyah whispers "oh no. Oh no no no". Kate looks shocked, "What's wrong? What is going on?!". "Its Ambush! Duck NOW!". Ambush rushed through the streets screaming and roaring in anger, shaking buildings and breaking windows, destroying anything in its path. "Are you okay?!". "I think so. What was that thing?!". Aaliyah responds " That was an ambush, the worst entity.". They both rush to electrical and when they enter, There was a Marauder, Smiler, and a Dreaded. "Stay back I got this" as Aaliyah pulls out a Dynobox. They both cover their eyes as the box flashes. The turn off the force field. Then, all entities turned to ashes and disintegrated in seconds.
