You independently read the argumentative text "The Outliers: The Story of Success" and found textual evidence to support your claim for what IQ intelligence tests should measure. You then narrowed it down to your strongest claim and found 2 pieces of textual evidence.
I provided the Topic Sentence.
To begin with, _____________________________ is one quality that contributes to a person's success, but IQ tests do not currently address.
Follow it with Evidence
Commentary
Evidence
Commentary
Conclusion Sentence