"Show, don't tell"

Compose a sentence or two which implies the following settings without explicitly stating what the setting is.

Cold, winter night
Noisy restaurant

Here's what I've got:

"My family and I are going out to dinner. When we get to the restaurant, I step out of the vehicle and into a snowbank. Snow falls into my boot. My foot is freezing as we enter the restaurant. We sit down and I remove my jacket. I feel a rush of relief as my body quickly warms up. The waiter attempts to take our order, but we can barely hear him."



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