3.1 Radical Rewrite: Improving a Faulty E-Mail Message (L.O. 4, 5) Your Task. Study the numbered sentences in the following poorly written e-mail message. In teams or in a class discussion, identify specific sentence faults.
Hint: You should find five sentence fragments, one dangling modifier, one passive-voice sentence, and one parallelism fault. Your instructor may ask you to revise the message to remedy these writing faults.