Appropriate language and punctuation
Read this short passage. Add all the missing punctuation, including
exclamation and question marks. Then replace each instance of the
word 'said' with a more descriptive and powerful verb.
Oh no what was that terrible noise said (
There's going to be an avalanche said (
) Daniel
Quick hurry as fast as you can Quicker Quicker Hurry up You must get
to the side away from the avalanche said (
) Omar
I can't I can't make it It's coming too quickly said (
Move said (
) Omar
I'm going too slowly said (
is... said (
) Daniel
) Omar
Yeah that was a close one though said (
) Daniel
) Daniel Omar I can't... the snow
Just do it said (
I'm aiming for that large rock over there
I've got it I've got it just go go go said (
Made it Wow look at that That's amazing said (
) Omar
A few minutes later Omar gave Daniel a friendly slap on the back and
said (
) It's alright the danger has passed. Are you OK
) Daniel
) Omar Quickly grab hold of my ski pole
) Daniel