8) Directions: Proofread the passage below. Then answer questions about errors in tone and grammar in the
passage.

Remember: The paragraph must be in a formal tone with no contractions and written completely in the third
person).

Can you even believe that a third of all teenagers todayare bullied online???
Cyberbullying
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is when you use electronic
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communication to bully a
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person.
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These communication is repeated hostile and severe with the
intent to embaras threaten or harass. It's much harder for you to flee a cyberbully, as they can "attack" throug
the internet, cell phones, and social media, the consequences of these horrible attacks have countless negatives
effects on teenagers and children and have mainly gone unpunished. Therefore individuals should be
prosecuted for bullying statements made on social media.

Which response is the best revision/edit for the underlined portion of text?
OA) Cyberbullying is the use of electronic communication to bully a person.
OB) Cyberbullying is like, really bad, when you bully someone.
OC) Cyberbullying is when you use really bad communication to bully a person.