PLS help me write a thesis statement for a personal narrative essay
what my essay is about: how quitting video games changed me for the better (write the thesis statement about this) (it changed my making me more focused and more patient)
my teacher wants a thesis statement that really engages with the reader, and has a lot more detail, and is interesting. example:

A good thesis statement: "A few years ago, I was in an accident that changed my life."
A BETTER thesis statement: "After breaking my arm in a car accident, I learned that acing a test can bring about the same personal satisfaction as playing football."

Here is my "good" thesis statement: "Quitting video games changed my life by helping me be more patient and focused."
Help me write a "better" thesis statement by: engaging with the reader, using more detail, and is interesting

And if you can PLS give me multiple thesis statement to choose from