3. Instructions:
One of your classmates has asked you to help him revise a speech he will be giving about the importance of facing fears. Revise his speech (found below) in the following ways:
Make the speech formal.
Add instructions to indicate where the visual images should be shown to audience, choosing images from the ones below. (For example, [Show image of Appalachian Trail sign].) Be sure to select at least two of the images, and make sure that they're relevant and helpful.
Make the details more specific to help strengthen the speech. You may add supporting details as needed, even if you make them up. (15 points)
NOTE: Underline any lines you copy from his original speech.
Speech text draft
Fears are bad for us. People shouldn't have them. Fears can psych you out and keep you from doing something worthwhile. Even something you've wanted to do all your life. Imagine finally being able to hike the Appalachian Trail, a super long trail running from Maine to Georgia. It's hard to hike this trail. Lots of people try but they can't because they don't have what it takes. But, you make it this far. Then, your worst fear, the thing that makes you really anxious happens as you're hiking. What would you do? You'd probably give up. Now you can't do your lifelong dream but you should be able to. We have to face our fears. It's not worth it to live life in fear!