I had to write a poem for English can y'all let me know what you think?

No More Goodbyes - Lily

I have known you since birth,
We weren't just friends, but also sisters,
We had said goodbye many times,
And with each it got a little harder.

I miss the times we once had,
All the laughs and all the tears,
But one day, we'll meet again,
This time it won't be in pain.

I don't let a moment pass,
Without wishing you were here,
At times I wish these thoughts would just disappear,
And yet they appear ever so clear.


I look at the stars wondering if you're looking too,
Waiting for the day we can lay side by side,
I hope the stars will be our guide,
And lead us together, without saying goodbye.