PLEASE HELP!!

Read the following text from a student essay. How can the writer best improve his or her
organization?
Gordie Howe joined the Detroit Red Wings in 1946 and played for them for twenty-five
years. Gordie Howe, known as "Mr. Hockey," was a legendary hockey player. Howe led the
Red Wings to four Stanley Cup trophies and scored a total of 801 goals with 1,046
assists. He also won the National Hockey League's Hart Trophy as most valuable player-
not just once, but six times. To honor Howe's contributions to hockey, in 2007, a bronze
statue of him was erected at the entrance to Detroit's Joe Louis Arena.
1. by swapping the first and second sentences
2. by finishing one topic before moving on to another
3. by moving the explanation of Howe's nickname to the end