On Monday, the city council created a new program to encourage citizens to recycle. This clever, cutting-edge program will help to put our
city on the map. Some difficult citizens, who do not appreciate the environment, will probably try to boycott the program.
Myra wants to edit the underlined sentences so that they use objective language.
Which revision accomplishes this?
1. This program aims to draw attention to our city. Some citizens will likely try to boycott the program.
2. This program will draw much-needed attention to our city. Some citizens will try to boycott the program.
3. This intelligent and innovative program will draw attention to our city. Some citizens will try to boycott the program.
4. This program will draw attention to our city. Some citizens may be difficult to convince and will try to boycott the program.