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The writer wants to revise Sentence 9 and Sentence 10. She wants to include the same information, but wants the
language to be more precise. Which sentences should the writer use instead?
OA. "A pass to use all season!" I said in an excited voice. "I think that I really need that!"
OB. "A season pass!" I exclaimed. "I need that!"
OC.
"A season pass!" I exclaimed aloud. "I think that I really need that."
OD. "A special card that allows me in every single day!" I said in a loud voice. "I need that!"