3. Instructions:
Summarize the passage below in at least two or three sentences. Then evaluate the passage, focusing on the quality of the details included. Which portions of the passage do not provide enough detail to help the reader understand the topic? Why? After you have evaluated the passage, revise it to improve the quality of its details. In your revision, show which parts of the original paragraph you are using by underlining them. Note: You may need to make up information to add to the paragraph. (15 points)