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Do you remember the topic of your essay and the 3 points you listed in the previous assignment? That is what you will write about as your 5 paragraph essay. Please DO NOT change the topic or 3 points. (If you need clarity, please send a message or contact me before writing your completed essay in the space below.)

Please review the following two essays and use as a guide for your essay. The first essay is a sample and the second essay provides highlights, numbers and labels that may be helpful. Be sure to read both essays.

My Greatest Accomplishment

We all have a lot of accomplishments. My greatest accomplishment is learning to swim. This is my greatest accomplishment because learning to swim allowed me to overcome my fear of water. Learning to swim was a new way to exercise. Also, learning to swim gave me the confidence to try new things.

Swimming always seemed like fun for most people. However, I did not like swimming because I had a fear of water. As I got older, I thought about learning to swim. I took swimming lessons at the YMCA. This allowed me to overcome my fear of water.

Once I learned to swim, I realized it was a great way to exercise. I try to exercise as much as possible. Learning to swim allowed me to exercise and burn a lot of calories in a short amount of time. Swimming is now my favorite way to exercise.

When I first started taking swimming lessons, I was extremely nervous. Of course I thought about drowning. Then I thought I would never learn to swim since I did not learn as a child. The swimming instructor was great and I finally learned to swim. Learning to swim gave me the confidence to try and learn new things in life.

Like I mentioned, we all have accomplishments. However, learning to swim is my greatest accomplishment. It allowed me to overcome my fear of water. Swimming is also a great way to exercise and it boosted my confidence. From now on, I will encourage everyone to learn to swim because it has enhanced my quality of life. Knowing how to swim is a lot of fun and it could also prevent you or your loved ones from drowning.

Please see the following which has the same essay with each section labeled.

My Greatest Accomplishment (Title)

(Paragraph #1 is the Introduction. The topic is highlighted and the 3 points are numbered.)

Paragraph #1 We all have a lot of accomplishments. My greatest accomplishment is learning to swim. This is my greatest accomplishment because learning to swim allowed me to 1. overcome my fear of water. 2. learning to swim was a new way to exercise. Also, learning to swim 3. gave me the confidence to try new things.

(Paragraph #2 discusses the 1st point and is highlighted.)

Paragraph #2 Swimming always seemed like fun for most people. However, I did not like swimming because I had a fear of water. As I got older, I thought about learning to swim. I took swimming lessons at the YMCA. This allowed me to overcome my fear of water.

(Paragraph #3 discusses the 2nd point and is highlighted.)

Paragraph #3 Once I learned to swim, I realized it was a great way to exercise. I try to exercise as much as possible. Learning to swim allowed me to exercise and burn a lot of calories in a short amount of time. Swimming is now my favorite way to exercise.

(Paragraph #4 discusses the 3rd point and is highlighted.)

Paragraph #4 When I first started taking swimming lessons, I was extremely nervous. Of course I thought about drowning. Then I thought I would never learn to swim since I did not learn as a child. The swimming instructor was great and I finally learned to swim. Learning to swim gave me the confidence to try and learn new things in life.

(Paragraph #5 is the conclusion.)

Paragraph #5 Like I mentioned, we all have accomplishments. However, learning to swim is my greatest accomplishment. It allowed me to overcome my fear of water. Swimming is also a great way to exercise and it boosted my confidence. From now on, I will encourage everyone to learn to swim because it has enhanced my quality of life. Knowing how to swim is a lot of fun and it could also prevent you or your loved one from drowning.

Type your completed essay in the space below. Do Not use the highlights, numbers and labels that were included in the sample when you write your essay. Be sure to include the title. Each of your paragraphs should have at least 4 sentences. Also, you may indent each paragraph or write in block style like the above essay was written.

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i need help with this

Do you remember the topic of your essay and the 3 points you listed in the previous assignment? That is what you will write about as your 5 paragraph essay. Please DO NOT change the topic or 3 points. (If you need clarity, please send a message or contact me before writing your completed essay in the space below.)

Please review the following two essays and use as a guide for your essay. The first essay is a sample and the second essay provides highlights, numbers and labels that may be helpful. Be sure to read both essays.

My Greatest Accomplishment

We all have a lot of accomplishments. My greatest accomplishment is learning to swim. This is my greatest accomplishment because learning to swim allowed me to overcome my fear of water. Learning to swim was a new way to exercise. Also, learning to swim gave me the confidence to try new things.

Swimming always seemed like fun for most people. However, I did not like swimming because I had a fear of water. As I got older, I thought about learning to swim. I took swimming lessons at the YMCA. This allowed me to overcome my fear of water.

Once I learned to swim, I realized it was a great way to exercise. I try to exercise as much as possible. Learning to swim allowed me to exercise and burn a lot of calories in a short amount of time. Swimming is now my favorite way to exercise.

When I first started taking swimming lessons, I was extremely nervous. Of course I thought about drowning. Then I thought I would never learn to swim since I did not learn as a child. The swimming instructor was great and I finally learned to swim. Learning to swim gave me the confidence to try and learn new things in life.

Like I mentioned, we all have accomplishments. However, learning to swim is my greatest accomplishment. It allowed me to overcome my fear of water. Swimming is also a great way to exercise and it boosted my confidence. From now on, I will encourage everyone to learn to swim because it has enhanced my quality of life. Knowing how to swim is a lot of fun and it could also prevent you or your loved ones from drowning.

Please see the following which has the same essay with each section labeled.

My Greatest Accomplishment (Title)

(Paragraph #1 is the Introduction. The topic is highlighted and the 3 points are numbered.)

Paragraph #1 We all have a lot of accomplishments. My greatest accomplishment is learning to swim. This is my greatest accomplishment because learning to swim allowed me to 1. overcome my fear of water. 2. learning to swim was a new way to exercise. Also, learning to swim 3. gave me the confidence to try new things.

(Paragraph #2 discusses the 1st point and is highlighted.)

Paragraph #2 Swimming always seemed like fun for most people. However, I did not like swimming because I had a fear of water. As I got older, I thought about learning to swim. I took swimming lessons at the YMCA. This allowed me to overcome my fear of water.

(Paragraph #3 discusses the 2nd point and is highlighted.)

Paragraph #3 Once I learned to swim, I realized it was a great way to exercise. I try to exercise as much as possible. Learning to swim allowed me to exercise and burn a lot of calories in a short amount of time. Swimming is now my favorite way to exercise.

(Paragraph #4 discusses the 3rd point and is highlighted.)

Paragraph #4 When I first started taking swimming lessons, I was extremely nervous. Of course I thought about drowning. Then I thought I would never learn to swim since I did not learn as a child. The swimming instructor was great and I finally learned to swim. Learning to swim gave me the confidence to try and learn new things in life.

(Paragraph #5 is the conclusion.)

Paragraph #5 Like I mentioned, we all have accomplishments. However, learning to swim is my greatest accomplishment. It allowed me to overcome my fear of water. Swimming is also a great way to exercise and it boosted my confidence. From now on, I will encourage everyone to learn to swim because it has enhanced my quality of life. Knowing how to swim is a lot of fun and it could also prevent you or your loved one from drowning.

Type your completed essay in the space below. Do Not use the highlights, numbers and labels that were included in the sample when you write your essay. Be sure to include the title. Each of your paragraphs should have at least 4 sentences. Also, you may indent each paragraph or write in block style like the above essay was written.

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