How should the paragraph be revised?
(1) Danielle spent several hours preparing for an upcoming audition for a play at the
community theater. (2) First she did vocal exercises to practice her diction and projection so
that her words would carry clearly throughout the large auditorium. (3) Then she studies the
text of the monologue to better understand the emotions, and motivations of the character
she plans to portray. (4) Finally she recited her monologue in front of a mirror many times,
making slight adjustments and improvements to her performance each time.
A. Sentence 1: Change spent to had spent, AND insert a comma after play.
B. Sentence 2: Change did to does, AND insert a comma after projection.
C. Sentence 3: Change studies to studied, AND delete the comma after emotions.
D. Sentence 4: Change recited to recites, AND delete the comma after times.