Read the following excerpts from the draft and revision of the Declaration of
Independence
DRAFT:
[H]e has suffered the administration of justice totally to
cease in some of these states, refusing his assent to laws
for establishing judiciary powers.
REVISION:
He has obstructed the Administration of Justice by
refusing his Assent to Laws for establishing Judiciary
powers.
How does the revision's tone differ from the draft's tone?
A. The tone in the revision is more determined and angry than in the draft.
B. The tone in the revision is more emotional and persuasive than in the draft.
C. The tone in the revision is more critical and outraged than in the draft.
D. The tone in the revision is more objective and authoritative than in the draft.