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Can anybody revise my paragraph? It's not that long.

It's about the book Great Gatsby, and the question is "does american dream destroy or inspire the character in the Great Gatsby?"
I chose the character named Daisy.

I would appreciate any grammer, run-on sentence, and citing quotes suggestions.

I will send my doc link individually if someone is willing to revise my paragraph.

If not answered thoughtfully, I will report.