During the revision process, which type of wordingRead the paragraph from Sora’s narrative essay.

That day after practice, I was frustrated and stomped home. In fact, I’m embarrassed to say I sulked for the rest of the day. Then my stubborn streak kicked in, and I decided that failure wasn’t an option. I practiced regularly until the day came when I was able to consistently hit the ball.

Which sentence from the paragraph best supports the idea that this paragraph belongs in the middle of Sora’s essay?

That day after practice, I was frustrated and stomped home.
In fact, I’m embarrassed to say I sulked for the rest of the day.
Then my stubborn streak kicked in, and I decided that failure wasn’t an option.
I practiced regularly until the day came when I was able to consistently hit the ball.
should a writer delete in a narrative essay?