Will give brainliest, I’m too lazy to do it.. thanks to anyone who helps

The paragraph below contains the basic elements of a paragraph, but it is just that—basic. Use what you have learned about effective sentences to revise the paragraph. Consider adding more specific details with quotations from the text. Also consider combining sentences, adding sentence variety, and incorporating transitions to increase the flow.

In “Lamb to the Slaughter,” Dahl conveys humor by transforming dinner to murder weapon and then back to dinner. Mary desperately wants to serve her husband dinner. “But, darling, you must eat!” Mary decides to serve dinner in a different way. She smashes the back of his head with a frozen leg of lamb. Mary serves the lamb again. The detectives are searching for the murder weapon. “Probably right under our very noses.” It was funny in a shocking way when Mary used the frozen lamb as a murder weapon; it’s even funnier when Dahl employs dramatic irony and has Mary serve the lamb again—as the detectives’ dinner!