Manny plans on revising and editing his introduction. First he plans on spending a moment editing. He decides to edit his introduction paragraph to his narrative suspense essay. What are some items Manny needs to edit in the paragraph below?

Mrs white unbolted the door, and tore it open forcefully, revealing a tall clean-shaven, young man. Mr White stared, wide-eyed, as his stomach filled with a sense of relief. Mrs white let out a sharp, pain filled gasp as she realized her guest was not who she hoped it would be. The man standing in the dorway wore a white fedora, accompanying his white suit. His eyes were shrouded in shadow, but it was apparant they burned a piercing blue as though they were glowing. His pale, almost white blonde hair poked out from underneath his hat. He sported a big, bright smile, and wore a cigar on his lip. Mrs White trembled, as he towered nearly a foot over her head

Mark the items Manny needs to edit in his introduction paragraph.? (multiple choices)

A. large details
B. capitalization
C. spelling
D. punctuation
E. textual evidence ​