Our science laboratory is inadequate due to years of insufficient funds. Our school lacks crucial pieces of equipment when compared to other high schools of our size in the state. At present, we have only four burettes, seven compound microscopes, one ammeter, two Bunsen burners, two spring scales, and three packages of litmus paper. It’s time to give us the equipment we need to learn. By investing in science, you’re investing in our futures.
Read this excerpt from a student’s speech to their school’s Parent-Teacher Association. Which comment provides the most effective feedback for this excerpt?
You should include images of the items or a chart to quantify the items.
Your language and tone are disrespectful and risk offending people.
You should describe the different kinds of students who use the science lab.
Your suggestions are timid and won’t do anything to solve this outrageous problem.