We got out of school early today, so James and I went over to the deli to get sandwiches. I got a large meatball with cheese. Then, we played mini-golf until the guy working there said we were too loud and told us we had to leave. When I got home, I saw that my math homework wasn’t in my folder, so my dad made me go all the way back to school. It was kind of embarrassing to ask my teacher for it.

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